Thursday 28 June 2018

The Rise and Rise of Steven Moffat: Exhibit #3

Continuing the wondrous catalogue of the varying achievements of Steven Moffat.

Chapter Three: The Peter Capaldi Years
The Complete Eighth Series of Doctor Who is one I find myself returning to time and time again. More than any other, this is Steven Moffat writing without an agenda. Its sole purpose is to be good. After what he thought of as a “miserable” year in 2013 - a script situation out of control and then finding that not even Matt Smith had been contracted for the anniversary special -  Moffat had his chance to put things back on the right track. Subsequently, Peter Capaldi’s first series feels truer and consistently better written than any series before or since (perhaps possibly excluding Christopher Eccleston’s one glorious year).  There are dynamics aboard the TARDIS, fireworks even, with the Doctor and Clara’s relationship feeling viscerally simmering and real. The awkward and tragic tale of Danny Pink is gut-wrenching and ultimately he has to make amends for his terrible mistake in Afghanistan. Death in Heaven is Steven Moffat’s best finale, the apotheosis of his time writing for the show. Its huge hearts beat furiously and in terms of its emotional content, this is the most complex and interesting of episodes. Gone are the fairy-tale days of Series 5-7. Here we have a Doctor Who with real and vital consequence. Even Clara, after her introduction as an impossible nanny, suddenly feels utterly believable as a down to Earth, occasionally bossy teacher. Perhaps the only hiccup of Series 8 is In the Forest of the Night which is ill-conceived from the get-go but the rest of this unusual, complicated run of stories is astonishing. Its greatness lies in the simple fact that Steven Moffat just wants it to be good. It doesn’t try to make the audience “like” it, it doesn’t even try to be particularly warm given this Doctor’s distant, spiky and sarcastic manner (all the more alien and strange – I love this Doctor!). It just wants to be and definitely is a good series.
And then Series 9 happens. Bluntly, Clara should have gone at the end of Series 8 because she is the biggest problem here. Her story was over. She’s absent from two episodes of Series 9 because she has nothing left to do and nowhere left to go (three if you include The Zygon Invasion). Yes, her apparent death fuels the majestic Heaven Sent but for the most part, she becomes more and more irritating and distant. 
Steven Moffat also makes the seemingly arbitrary decision to “do 2-parters.” To be honest, only Under the Lake/Before the Flood seems to warrant its length, the story clearly a tale of two halves. The Magician’s Apprentice/The Witch’s Familiar feels laborious. Compare the opening to that of The Stolen Earth in 2008: we zip from one location to the next (both include the shadow proclamation) at dizzying speed in The Stolen Earth; in The Magician’s Apprentice time is made for lingering establishing shots, moody lighting and a creeping atmosphere, thus slicing through all that fun and spectacle and pace with an enormous bore-ometer. The story is flat, its narrative motor seriously spluttering. The actual number of events in The Magician’s Apprentice/The Witch’s Familiar are minimal. To be honest, if you’re doing a Davros 2-parter, it’s an epic planet-shredder, not a chamber piece which is very much how this feels. The scenes between the Doctor and Davros are admittedly cracking but it takes an age to get to them while the Daleks talk about conquest but do very little. They don’t even leave their one big room before getting covered in and killed by faeces. The Zygon Invasion/The Zygon Inversion is a little better, but still feels underdeveloped. Why is the Zygon called Bonnie? What exactly are the arrangements of the Zygon-human pact? Why does nobody react when the Zygon changes outside the shopping centre? Are they zygons too? Just what does truth or consequences actually mean? There are just too many unanswered questions for the shows to feel solid and watertight. In the meanwhile, there’s a flat cliff-hanger and an all-female UNIT support cast who look more wet than a roomful of Captain Yateses. Of course, that final anti-war speech saves the show and Series 9, and for the first time in 2015, Doctor Who is affecting. The Girl Who Died/The Woman Who Lived are essentially two stories (which should have been split up in the running order, the better to illustrate Ashildr’s passage through history if not to make her appearance as the highwayman more of a surprise). 
Funnily enough, once the 2-parters stop, the series’ quality takes an upward turn. Sleep No More is unfairly maligned. It enjoys its vivid originality, a good deal of tension and looks and feels unique. Face the Raven has got that last 15 minutes of pure excellence following a fairly run-of-the-mill tale and Heaven Sent is, as has been noted all over the internet, something of a modern-day masterpiece. Hell Bent seems to get ignored in the light of its preceding episode but it constitutes an unsung, very strong finale despite the fact that Gallifrey is now rather unexcitingly returned, and Rassilon is now played by the clearly flailing Donald Sumpter. The series has, all along, been gearing itself towards the moments we never get to hear: when the Doctor and Clara finally talk. And that’s a beautiful ending.
When Series 9 finished, it felt to me like something of a wasted season. Where the year before we’d had 10 terrific stories (and only 1 poor one in In The Forest), here we had only 2 or 3 strong episodes, out of only 8 stories (if The Girl Who Died and The Woman Who Lived are counted as one). The stories that don’t work are twice as long as usual! The Series 9 Moffat Master Plan simply wasn’t as impressive as it had set out to be. Nevertheless, there is no denying the fact that he wanted to shake things up a bit, change the rules and give the Doctor a different playing field to train on. It was the grandest of follies. Ironically, he got it so very right in Series 8 that I’d have been happy with another few years of that, thank you very much.
It’s perhaps unsurprising then that in his final year at the helm of Doctor Who – another year he never expected to be writing - Steven Moffat reverts to the now-traditional structure of a season, breezy and light and “Welcome aboard!” to start with, 2-parter heart-wrencher to finish. Bill Potts is a breath of fresh air, the Monk trilogy in the middle is an unusual and mostly very successful departure, whilst the return of the Ice Warriors and the Mondasian Cybermen are massively triumphant victories. Series 10 feels as if the show has had an airing, a bit of a spring clean. The Pilot is a “hopping-on” point, free from past continuity and beginning to create a continuity of its own: the story of the university professor who has been there for 70 years. Smile, Thin Ice, Knock Knock and Oxygen feel similarly free to do whatever they like and that massively melodramatic, hair-raising cliff-hanger at Oxygen’s close is the start of something new again – The Doctor Goes Blind 4-parter. Only let down by its underdeveloped finale, the strange tale of the monks is unnerving, radical and just what you wouldn’t expect a showrunner on the way out to come up with. The Pyramid at the End of the World in particular is spectacular, a tension permeating every scene. It’s often overlooked in the face of the similarly brilliant but very different Extremis, but both are peaks in Doctor Who’s history. Finally, we end with a Scottish folk tale from Rona Munro, a Classic-Who homage in Empress of Mars and then another blistering season finale from Mr Moffat. World Enough and Time is unbelievably strong and harrowing, The Doctor Falls the perfect ending for this most emotional and stoic of Doctors. Whilst it’s not quite as interesting as Death in Heaven, it’s doing a different job. It’s giving this Doctor his valedictory cry. His calling out of the Masters positively sings. Watching him race through the woods, blasting away Cybermen with his sonic, we see a desperate but ever-trying Doctor. And it’s clear how wonderful a hero he is. It has to be said also that Peter Capaldi is never less than completely astonishing. Bill’s story ends somewhat abruptly and Twice Upon a Time doesn’t really help our understanding of the reality of what we see here, but with incoming showrunner Chris Chibnall around the corner, it’s clear that things have come to an end…
Under Steven Moffat, the Peter Capaldi era constitutes as mixed a bag as Matt Smith’s three years as the Doctor. Each series feels starkly different. Even Capaldi’s Doctor changes over the period. In fact, many could argue that this was Colin Baker’s Doctor done right. He begins acerbically and ends with a call for kindness. What is clearest of all again though, is that Steven Moffat just cannot settle. He is continually revising what he thinks the show can do. From “just 1-parters” to “just 2-parters” to a “great big 4-parter in the middle,” structurally the show changes all the time. If this restlessness, however, does make for the vague feeling that Doctor Who isn’t quite as confident as it once was, Moffat punctures that illusion at every turn, delivering scripts of the standard of Deep Breath, Dark Water, Last Christmas, Heaven Sent, The Pilot, Extremis and World Enough and Time. Far from lessening the show’s popularity, Moffat’s ability to alter the goalposts have ensured that the show stays fresh and vital. It has always changed. But when Russell T Davies took over, he put a stamp on it: Doctor Who was made in a very certain way. When Moffat took over, he showed that there was no such thing as a “certain way,” that the show could flourish in a thousand formats. This was not the work of a troubled Scotsman with writer’s block; this could well be the work of a genius. 
To Be Continued.
JH

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